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its great you just need better voices! get a proper deep man voice for jesus make him talk a little slower would make it a whole lot funnier and have marys voice sound a lot older and naggier! its got loads of potiential the drawings are great just need to ad a bit more animation! great work keep it up man!
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Short a few drawings for an animation wouldn't you say!? e.g. the most exciting thing was the red dot on the start page, which i didn't even click! next time.... (1) some music (2) maybe some random images of chuck when you click or if you but in some serious effort maybe some animations based on the jokes! This kind of thing is made to be put in a blog. Not in the portal to clog everything up! good luck in the future!
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i think there may be extream problems! it seems to just sick through sscreen shots! :( and wrecks my PC!:(
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i have seen to many of these.... yout gonna kickly build a reputation just like Fagot Fedarations and who wants that? do something new you clearly have a lot of ideas!
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auh god dame it! just eating breckfast that look so soar this was was f*cking hilarious! keep it up!
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right i wasnt gonna watch this after a few seconds in, but i decided to give it a chance! you did spend time in creating it, and its ok some bits are pretty funny, however watch other peoples submissions which contain subtitles, i.e. they stick to the one color. now i know you probably changed the color so it would stand out from the background, do NOT do this! keep it all in one suit. same color, font, shadow/ no shadow! make room at the bottom of the screen to place the text rather than having the user to try and read it over a graphic background! next time consider voices! good luck in the future! :)
Author's Response:
i did different colors so who can tell who was talking i would use voices but my microphone headset makes me sound like a white boy
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These are great, its the exact same as my college even the cloths are pretty similar. the jokes are great but the voices are a bit rough(recorded that is) should try and get your hands on adobe aduition and edit out the noise!
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while waiting for it to load i read "mrkomiks" review and thought "oh no" but after watching i really want to see the next ep! it was great :) well done 5/5 10/10
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it was fantastic the concept was brill! i thought it was going to go on fr longer tho:( it really is great anyone who gives this under 8 does not know how much work was involved! looking forward to something more soon! :)
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you got me but then i thought, wait a min theres something not right here! any chance you could show me the action script for that?
also next time you should make a story line for it and catch out more dumb people like Matthii and Dragoprodutions! lol
Author's Response:
Simply put; in the page source there's an external variable for username. "ng_username". So basically you just apply that variable to dynamic text. But it can be improved through more robust script.
All i did was set an if for both logged and unlogged users, and made a button go to the userpage.
code
if(ng_username==undefined)
{usernameDisplay=1922454352+Math.floo r(Math.random()*9900);}
else{if(ng_username!==""){usernameDis play=ng_username;}}
and the button is simply
on(release){getURL("http://"+ng_usern ame+".newgrounds.com/","_blank");}
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